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Miguel Baptista's avatar

Its a good start, we want to read what comes next.

Mary's avatar

Love this! Your style of writing is easy for the reader to ignite all of their senses.

I shall wait patiently for the next chapter….

Bflocatholic's avatar

Vivid. Well written. Thank you.

Rae's avatar

Thank you!

Zach's avatar

Wow! What a story! What a gift of clear and effective communication you have to engage the reader. Please do more stories.

Alan Varagona's avatar

It breaks my heart that such encounters really happen. I believe that it saddens our Lord, regardless of which party is fostering the rift. Thank you for crafting this reflection. I pray for those abused an look forward to the hope, for them and I, when there will be no more sorrows or tears.

Brian O’Neill's avatar

Rae that's very dark. Given your current situation I'd refrain from writing such dark pieces

Rae's avatar

This was written long ago. I'm sorry if my real life that I escaped from is too "dark"...but perhaps I understand that God gave me the strength to escape.

Brian O’Neill's avatar

Indeed he did Rae.writing such dark materials leavers yourself open to demonic attacks